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 Post subject: Here we go again...
PostPosted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 4:09 pm 
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I think you will probably survive a monthly post by me in here, so here we go again. :)

This time it's an oldie. And we're stepping it up on the aggression scale a tiny, tiny bit. ^^




Truth

Are there words not said, that I should hear
Are you hiding something from me dear
Are you keeping dirty secrets I should fear

So you think you know what’s on my mind
You say you know my heart is not blind
Yet, there are truths you don’t want me to find

What twinkles in your eye, my dear friend
Are all these secrets your newest trend
How about all those letters you did send…?

How stupid did you think that I would be?
You insult my mental capability!
Did you honestly think
I would not see!?


Oh, I always knew when you came home late
All the secret calls to set the date
I know the rosy scent I learned to hate

You may cry all the tears that you see fit
They're the simplest act you'll ever hit
Why did you even bother faking it?!

I hope you found what you went looking for
I hope a fudge was worth all this!
You raped my heart with your beloved whore

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 4:13 pm 
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A monthly post from you in here works for me. :)

And now, about this piece, fiction or drawn from a real experience?


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It would be very very nice to read more. Once a month would be wonderful Pretty Lady. Even though this poem makes me sad. :(

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Thank you Josan. :) And since I'm about the only one alive in here right now, I hope the rest won't mind either. ;) And with a post a month, I have enough poetry on my hard drive to last me untill retirement. Some would have to be in Swedish though. ^^

And about this poem, both fiction and real experience.
Unlike the poem, I never really saw it coming. I had my suspicions, and I found clues, but they felt so ludicrous I ignored them. Then, I got a call out of the blue one afternoon. A friend of both me and my boyfriend said the famous words: "I think we need to talk." A not so pleasant evening followed. :/


Aww, thank you Fawning Disciple. :) And as awful as it sounds, I'm happy it made you sad. Then it means the poem wasn't just empty words plastered on a screen. :)

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Trust is much overrated.

Spoken like a true cynic :cool:

Very expressive piece. I like the gradual change from Hmm over Uh? to Grrr!

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Gorth wrote:
from Hmm over Uh? to Grrr!


Ha,ha! Great summary! :D
And me I'm more in the innocent and naïve category, or at lest that's the lie I keep trying to feed my friends. ;)

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Well, I.. who needs it, who wants it, why bother, when hearty lies do the trick, besides it seems rather obsessive to warrant accounts.. And don't get angry, get even and where's a chainsaw when you need one.. (kinda reminds me in an odd way about American Psycho). Besides being truthful is pretty boring unless it's abusive.

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As the proverbial wise man once said: truth is only abusive if you let it be. :cool:

Hmm... I very seldom get angry, but next time, I'll be sure to get myself a chainsaw. :twisted:

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No, no no!

There are many better methods of revenge. Oh, the things I could teach you. :twisted:


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Now, this sounds intriguing!
You have enough revenge skills to write me a handbook? ;)

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Oh, in so many ways, from subtle to cruel to outright humiliation... bwuhahaha!


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You know, that statement doesn't really portray you in the most amiable light. ;) But I couldn't help but laugh out loud! :D

I would really need to learn that. I would. :) I utterly suck at revenge. I simply can't stay angry with someone for more than a day, at most. I have tried, but no.

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Title: The 6th Non-Sense
Firstborn wrote:
As the proverbial wise man once said: truth is only abusive if you let it be. :cool:


As I just said: The truth is the lie you believe in..

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Ah Jan, feel flattered. Yours is the first quote from someone else that I can ever recall adding to my sig, here or on any other forums for that matter.


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Title: The 6th Non-Sense
Nights of the Old Republished AJ&J Winterscape Torment Campaign setting.

Josan wrote:
Ah Jan, feel flattered. Yours is the first quote from someone else that I can ever recall adding to my sig, here or on any other forums for that matter.


Well.. Janmanden said:

1. I dub thee Darth Josanmanden, rise my new apprentice.
2. Flattered?! You only quoted ONE?! ONE!!!
3. God only exist in the minds of fools, don't be that fool.
4. Even though it's benign it could still kill me eventually.
5. Your flattery worked, but it's spend already, please add another.
6. Brrrrraaaainss..

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