Stranger than the last one

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Stranger than the last one

Post by Firstborn » Fri Oct 24, 2008 9:29 pm

In the spirit of the upcoming holiday, I thought I write something fitting.
I said I'd make a monthly post in here, so here it is. :) A bit on the strange side this time though.




In the end

Death came at last
Gruesome and slow
Greasy eyes, feathers and dust
making my sockets hollow

Blue were my lips
Kissing them tight
Squeezing hard, beating and pain
breaking my bones till midnight

Digging the pit
Hiding your sin
Bleeding worms, shovel and rust
watching my grave from within

Off fell my ribs
Rats in my heart
Oozing flesh, rotting for you
ripping my casket apart

Up I will crawl
Find a way through
Leaving now, undead I rise
Vengeance will fall upon you!
"Love isn't blind, it's retarded!"

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Post by Jan » Sat Oct 25, 2008 1:35 am

:lol: Nice.

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Post by Gorth » Sat Oct 25, 2008 9:00 am

Nice :cool:

Sounds like you *really* hold a grudge against that guy :lol:
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Post by Firstborn » Sat Oct 25, 2008 10:30 am

Thanks! Glad you guys like it. :D

And Gorth, yes, getting killed might do that to a woman. ;)
"Love isn't blind, it's retarded!"

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Post by Joseph » Sat Oct 25, 2008 10:52 am

So you're saying that you're actually undead? Too bad Magnus is MIA. You'd be perfect for his Zombie Communist movement. :wink:

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Post by Firstborn » Sat Oct 25, 2008 12:27 pm

*Answers in incoherent Zombie speak and gurgles.*
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Post by Jan » Sat Oct 25, 2008 6:52 pm

(decoding the matrix.. that dot is a gurgle)

Online divorcee jailed after killing virtual hubby

Rising from the dead is probably easier than hacking into accounts anyway.. but I'd also rather read your poem than decoding bits and bytes. :wink:

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Post by Trailer Park Jesus » Sun Nov 02, 2008 4:13 pm

i feed on your flesh after bashing your brains
magnus wants me. he's so gay.

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Post by Gorth » Thu Nov 06, 2008 1:15 pm

Hmm... I always liked girls with brains. They leave such a nice aftertaste :P
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