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Most recent poem

Post by Fluffy17 » Sun Dec 23, 2012 8:20 pm

Removed for freshness because Fluffy has now submitted it for the next issue of the ezine...
I have no time for flat characters why should I have times for flat people?

I'm Otto von Bismarck watch me blow, watch the butterflies coming out of my nose.

"You can't choose what bothers you, that's why it bothers you."

-Rachel Duncan

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Re: Most recent poem

Post by Joseph » Sun Dec 23, 2012 8:26 pm

Epic poems with no set metre are best. Good work. I enjoyed it. Personal reflection, social commentary and a good personal resolve to end it.

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Re: Most recent poem

Post by Fluffy17 » Sun Dec 23, 2012 8:29 pm

Thanks, I am happy I wrote it really made me think about how I misdirected my anger at people. I would've done things a lot differently if I had a time machine.

Kinda surprising that this was well originally a My Little Pony Poem I wrote.
I have no time for flat characters why should I have times for flat people?

I'm Otto von Bismarck watch me blow, watch the butterflies coming out of my nose.

"You can't choose what bothers you, that's why it bothers you."

-Rachel Duncan

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Re: Most recent poem

Post by AngryKidJoe » Tue Jan 01, 2013 11:43 am

... I anticipate the next issue for I have not read it.
His twisted mind concluded that if he was what he ate, and he wanted to stay human...

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